A take on poetic comics?

I remember doing this after I drew Chara on my sketch pad, a drawing I haven't posted yet and should. I kinda want to have their last thoughts while they were on their death bed. 
My head cannon of Chara is someone who has been misunderstood and is an actual person instead of how people may think of them. 
And the first scene I drew it like that since I kinda want to foreshadow the same death grip that I imagine Sans would have if their brother was killed.